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Post by phanthom on Aug 21, 2015 15:20:06 GMT -8
 Hey guys, just finished this piece yesterday. I would love your thoughts on it. Let me know if there's anything I could improve. I really wanted to do some kind of background or just add a bit more but I couldn't think of anything. So let me know if you have any suggestions, I might come back to this drawing |
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Post by moonlight on Aug 21, 2015 21:16:19 GMT -8
I think this looks great!! The only thing I can suggest is the anatomy on Alice and there's a litle trick for that  see?? kinda? the head is too small, and it's just a little off mine is far from perfect, but you get the gist? if not, there's this dude called sycra on youtube who does these types of tutorials on how to get anatomy down and it's easy with practice!! Lots of upside down triangles he explains everything very well! he has one vid on female anatomy and one on male! I think it looks AMAZING though, my friend! |
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Post by phanthom on Aug 21, 2015 23:05:45 GMT -8
@wallghost Thank you so much, appreciate the feedback! I did draw the shoulders too wide, is that what you mean? hm I guess it would work if I had made the head a bit bigger as well. Depends on how you look at it maybe, head too small, or shoulders too wide.
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Post by electra on Aug 23, 2015 10:12:05 GMT -8
The only thing is Alice's anatomy but that's it. The shape and tones in the mushroom and caterpillar are actually really gorgeous. Especially the mushroom. It actually gives me B&W Ken Wong vibes.
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Post by ZeldAlice on Aug 25, 2015 4:22:30 GMT -8
That's both beautiful and sad! Overall, I think the whole drawing looks very well done!  |
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Post by phanthom on Aug 26, 2015 22:47:48 GMT -8
Thanks so much for the compliments guys!  @ajcrowley it's actually supposed to be just a hole where the cocoon was torn open haha |
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